tell me smth about this 2 pages. I think i will have 11 pages. + 1 colored page. Next 2 pages will be how he try to improve her. Then 2 pages hairdress and he know secret obout her hair. last page - happy end.
The walk in closet with the photo realistic clothes on the mannequin looks really good. Thats a nice mix of illustrative (other clothes, hat boxes) and photography.
The bottom bit with the characters aren't really that convincing as the face and the longshot of her body (knees up) doesnt seem detailed enough. Perhaps her pose is also a little contrived, too face forward. Try having her silhouette outside the door. And for starters perhaps the frame on the right with the close up could be on the left instead then we zoom out to see that she is looking at all the clothes in there etc.
The walk in closet with the photo realistic clothes on the mannequin looks really good. Thats a nice mix of illustrative (other clothes, hat boxes) and photography.
ReplyDeleteThe bottom bit with the characters aren't really that convincing as the face and the longshot of her body (knees up) doesnt seem detailed enough. Perhaps her pose is also a little contrived, too face forward. Try having her silhouette outside the door. And for starters perhaps the frame on the right with the close up could be on the left instead then we zoom out to see that she is looking at all the clothes in there etc.