mr Hafiz, tell me smth about style, haching and page. this one how he standing on the street and than see her in crowd. 1 picture - smoking, 2 - his face, she - in crowd. what to do with background?
The focus now should be more towards the transition of the pages.
Have a look at this example from Clover. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10113854/Transition%20Example.jpg
.. and from an Osamu Tezuka manga I think (taken from McCloud's understanding comics) https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10113854/Transition%20example%202.jpg
It plays on close ups of the characters and how the audience gets to see the reaction of these characters. The spacing and panels are to build this "love at first sight" mood. Use certain extremities of angles (Long shots to close ups) for dramatic purposes.
The focus now should be more towards the transition of the pages.
ReplyDeleteHave a look at this example from Clover.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10113854/Transition%20Example.jpg
.. and from an Osamu Tezuka manga I think (taken from McCloud's understanding comics)
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10113854/Transition%20example%202.jpg
It plays on close ups of the characters and how the audience gets to see the reaction of these characters. The spacing and panels are to build this "love at first sight" mood. Use certain extremities of angles (Long shots to close ups) for dramatic purposes.